WE OBSESS ABOUT AGE BUT DON'T VALUE TIME
collaborative poem from Carrie Hill and Prudence Brooks
WE OBSESS ABOUT AGE BUT DON’T VALUE TIME (a collaboration by Carrie Hill & Prudence Brooks) Remember when days and weeks seemed boundless? Jumping rope once felt like growing wings, time metered out in blushing dawns and fading dusks. Seconds marked by the tap-tap-tap of Sunday shoes on sidewalks and echoes of Miss Mary Mack floating on warm April winds. All that required our attention was dripping popsicles, whose turn it was at hopscotch, which house we were reporting to when the street lights opened their twilight eyes. Whatever happened to taking joy instead of waiting for it? Now, there resides an eerie stillness where the fruits of simple summers wither, puckering like persimmons at first frost. Scattered amid skeletons of leaves lies Miss Mary Mack’s rotting remains. The jump rope, long abandoned, frays in a decrepit schoolyard and children no longer romp over the crumbled rubble where the old video store once sat. No one finds catharsis in carnage anymore.
Miss Mary Mack, mack mack… Interstingly, I was thinking about something similar when i wrote this piece.
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Gorgeous post Prudence! 🩶🤍